Catcher
in the Rye
In Catcher in the Rye
there is many examples of author’s voice. In this small section there are many
as well. One I found is the author uses sentence structure in a unique way to
capture the attention of the audience. The structure I am speaking of is unique
to this excerpt. First Phoebe will say “daddy’ll kill you” and then holden will
come back with a response that denies that his dad will kill him just be mad
for a little bit and then he will be over it. Then he tries to change the
subject and move away from it but his sister always starts it back up with
“daddy’ll kill you”. An example of Holden trying to avoid it is, “”No he won’t.
The worst he’ll do, he’ll give me hell again, then he’ll send me to that goddam
military school. That’s all he’ll do to me. And in the first place, I won’t
even be around. I’ll be away. I’ll be—I’ll probably be in Colorado on this
ranch.”
“Don’t
make me laugh. You can’t even ride a horse.”
“Who
can’t? Sure I can. Certainly I can. They can teach you in about two minutes,” I
said. “Stop picking at that.” She was picking at that adhesive tape on her arm.
“Who gave you that haircut?” I Asked her. I just noticed what a stupid haircut
somebody had gave her. It was way too short.”
Another example of author’s voice is by encouraging the
readers to want to know more. The more Phoebe seemed to pry at if he had
flunked out and that her dad would be mad, the madder Holden seemed to get and
you kept reading to see if he would snap. You can feel his anger escalate when
he says, “Nobody’s gonna kill me. Use your head. In the first place, I’m going
away.” Here you can feel him becoming heated and so he just starts blurting
things and with this bubbling anger you wanted to see what the outcome would
be.
My final example of author’s voice is the way the character
thinks. Holden has a very interesting way of thinking and when he describes
what is happening and what he thinks or how he feels about a subject it makes
you very interested. It’s also nice to know what his thoughts on a subject are
since he is usually very aggressive. He either complements things or can be
very negative. An example of this is when Phoebe first thinks that he may have
been kicked out of Pency and his thoughts on her knowledge.
“How come you’re not home Wednesday?...
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