Friday, November 20, 2015

Catcher in the Rye

In Catcher in the Rye there is many examples of author’s voice. In this small section there are many as well. One I found is the author uses sentence structure in a unique way to capture the attention of the audience. The structure I am speaking of is unique to this excerpt. First Phoebe will say “daddy’ll kill you” and then holden will come back with a response that denies that his dad will kill him just be mad for a little bit and then he will be over it. Then he tries to change the subject and move away from it but his sister always starts it back up with “daddy’ll kill you”. An example of Holden trying to avoid it is, “”No he won’t. The worst he’ll do, he’ll give me hell again, then he’ll send me to that goddam military school. That’s all he’ll do to me. And in the first place, I won’t even be around. I’ll be away. I’ll be—I’ll probably be in Colorado on this ranch.”
            “Don’t make me laugh. You can’t even ride a horse.”
            “Who can’t? Sure I can. Certainly I can. They can teach you in about two minutes,” I said. “Stop picking at that.” She was picking at that adhesive tape on her arm. “Who gave you that haircut?” I Asked her. I just noticed what a stupid haircut somebody had gave her. It was way too short.”

Another example of author’s voice is by encouraging the readers to want to know more. The more Phoebe seemed to pry at if he had flunked out and that her dad would be mad, the madder Holden seemed to get and you kept reading to see if he would snap. You can feel his anger escalate when he says, “Nobody’s gonna kill me. Use your head. In the first place, I’m going away.” Here you can feel him becoming heated and so he just starts blurting things and with this bubbling anger you wanted to see what the outcome would be.

My final example of author’s voice is the way the character thinks. Holden has a very interesting way of thinking and when he describes what is happening and what he thinks or how he feels about a subject it makes you very interested. It’s also nice to know what his thoughts on a subject are since he is usually very aggressive. He either complements things or can be very negative. An example of this is when Phoebe first thinks that he may have been kicked out of Pency and his thoughts on her knowledge.
“How come you’re not home Wednesday?...



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2 comments:

  1. I really appreciated your blog post and the great writing detail you made in this post. The first quote you explained really well how Holden always tried to change the subject but Phoebe would always keep bringing up "daddy'll kill you" I also noticed that when I was doing my blog post. Overall this is a very good post but one question I do have is why do you think Phoebe got so upset with Holden and put her face in a pillow for awhile? And what does it say about Holden for wanting to come back just to see Phoebe?

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  2. I think she really looks up to him and she can see how he is on a downhill spiral. She has been there when he has been kicked out of other schools and seen how it upset his parents.

    I think he really wanted to go back and see her because she is the closest person to him in the family and it makes him sad and even more depressed when he realizes he has upset her with his actions. And I ultimately think it will compile onto his depression if it hasn't already.

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